The moon smiles at me from her palace of eyes: "We live under a broken spell" she sings - mirror glances on dark waters. Treacherous forest harmonizes with the winds, glass promises scattered around the room of your rib cage, shed light - a curious play, an ordered mess, living exhibition of tries. Curse of the kinds, homesick angels without heaven. I’m missing a chapter, why do we start what cannot be stopped why do we find what cannot be kept. It’s a mysterious Blues under the sky, a perilous waltz we all want to dance - a time has passed, the night is done, on the lake rehearsal of dawn. One last word before we part: shall our hearts stay open and soft. © Copyright I.B. 2016
I love how your brain fits images and feelings into words.
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This is such a wonderful compliment, thank you ever so much! ❤
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From the very first lines the tone was set … mysterious, restrained, like a nocturne. As usual you weave the images together in just the right ways to make them intriguing and lovely. Well done!
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The nocturne effect is exactly what I was going for! Thank you so much for your kind words, I’m beyond delighted you like this. ❤
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Absolutely delectable imagery with amazing flow and rhythm!
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I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you so much ❤
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❤ I adore you(r writing!)
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