This is a writing experiment, or better, a writing exercise. I came across a rather well known article on The New Yorker and – as it’s often the case with good writing – felt inspired by the apparent lack of love in these humorous poems. Here I had a lot of fun paraphrasing and twisting them to match my expectations as a, perhaps idealistic, romantic at heart.
I hope you’ll have as much fun reading as I did writing.
Of course I do not mean any disrespect nor copyrights infringement with this. Credit goes to the author John Kenney, you can find the original poems by clicking on the link above.
Kindle Fire
They say love is like light.
Should I believe
the man on the radio,
his trained voice,
his rehearsed poise.
The point is that your face is lit up right now.
Because you are laughing at something
on the screen of your tablet
and I wish I was made of wires and circuits
right now, just to stare back at you
like that.
I need to sleep,
it’s been a long day
I sigh the sigh I sigh when I want your attention.
I have to be up early tomorrow
yet I am counting the freckles on your nose
as if I had forgotten your features, like a goldfish,
as if I haven’t seen them a million times before,
and you have no idea,
because you have earbuds on
and you are laughing at your screen,
bless your screen.
Maybe love is like light
in that it fills every space.
Seriously. I might head to the bathroom for a cold shower.
Orgy
Late autumn morning.
Overcast and cold.
In the air a promise of rain.
Dead leaves on the ground.
We decided to go out back
to clean up the yard.
You said, in your sexy voice,
“We’re out of garbage bags.”
And in your shrugging you brushed against me
just right,
the next thing I know
you’re pinned to the brick wall,
my no longer gloved hands
making a delicious path underneath
your fleece sweatshirt,
your work shirt,
and your T-shirt.
“We better go in”, you breathed.
later we heated up left over pasta
and ate it on the couch
trying to figure out how Jason Bourne’s knees still work.
Did I say orgy?
Sorry, in my defence
I thought the neighbours were watching.
Baking Night
Where is the...
What?
...salt. I need some more...
Sorry. Here.
You know I never put enough...
Yes. Wait. I didn't turn on the oven...
I did.
Oh, O.K. You know me too well...
Almost done. So, what are you...
The chicken! Fuck.
Chicken?
What?
Isn't it frozen?
Yes. I forgot to take it out.
Laugh. Did you?
There's time.
Damn I can't focus on baking.
Am I distracting you?
There's flour on your cheek.
Yes.
This counter looks comfy.
What?
Nothing, I love you.
Always the Right Time
Standing at the door
ready to go,
the cat glaring at me
(We are about to leave for my sister’s surprise party.)
I turn and see you
in the kitchen
like an engineer on a space mission
fumbling with a theodolite.
Only it’s not a theodolite.
It’s a clementine.
And you are trying to peel it with your too short fingernails
over the sink.
You look up, and hold the clementine up towards me
you say “Want some?” I understand.
It would be impossible for me to say no,
I close the door. We’ll be late.
Are You in the Mood?
I am.
Let’s leave the kids with your sister.
Have a late dinner.
Bathe together.
Maybe share a bottle of red wine.
And do that thing I can only do with you.
Blast 80’s power ballads and dance barefoot until 5 in the morning.
© I.B.2020 / © John Kenney 2018
Photo by: Lucas Gallone